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Eyesight
It was May before my attention came to spring and
my word I said to the southern slopes I've
missed it, it came and went before I got right to see:
don't worry, said the mountain, try the later northern slopes or if
you can climb, climb into spring: but said the mountain
it's not that way with all things, some that go are gone
 / Photo by Randy Son Of Robert /
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Commentary by Ivan M. Granger
This poem is a delightful meditation on how form emerges "spiraling from a center" of essential nature.
I look for the forms
things want to come as
from what black wells of possibility,
how a thing will
unfold:
Form is the expression of a more subtle foundation. Ammons is using the world of color and shape as an exercise for the awareness, a way of looking at the outer to discover the inner.
Looking at the world this way, a stillness settles on us, and we begin to see the stillness of things, even in their movement. And we start to recognize how shape and color both hide and reveal the true nature of things.
so that the birch tree white
touched black at branches
will stand out
wind-glittering
totally its apparent self:
Looking at the world this way, the perceptual wall between ourselves and what we witness fades away, and we become something new, bigger, open, a collective unity, "the self not mine but ours"...
not so much looking for the shape
as being available
to any shape that may be
summoning itself
through me
from the self not mine but ours.
Wonderful!
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