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silent_lotus
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 Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 12:20 pm Post subject: Morning Mortar |
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annaruiz
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| Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 12:41 pm Post subject: |
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bamboo bowing
heron's smoky sky
lost in the horizon
~A
Ahhhh... so. Dear Silent. |
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Ness
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| Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:03 pm Post subject: |
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| gravel paths at peace, the grey and the golden, beautifully writ, s_l |
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Dick
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| Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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Good morning dear silent lotus,
Your "Morning Mortar" is a delightful chakai.
Bows & smiles,
Dick |
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zorba
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| Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:55 pm Post subject: |
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come noon sun spreads
On liquid lake
moving mercury musing
Settled rocks
Receive thrust
Of falling water
Trees spike on
Loamy land
Pine needles stacked beneath
Autumn in full bloom
Marsh hold footprints
Covered in
Its chrome blanket
I know you have been here
Before me |
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Myamberdog
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| Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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Sort of a stretched-out lawless haiku....
I love your daring!!!!!!
DogsHaveRoutines |
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Michael Firewalker
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Location: Seattle
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| Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 1:06 am Post subject: |
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see them clash
golden flashes
writhing past
green lily pads
mikey |
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jm
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| Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 2:46 am Post subject: |
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Morning Mortar,
Thank you, sl, for this prophetic blessing.
That's exactly what we'll be doing in the morning,
mixing mortar and fixing damage
from the hundred year storm.
I'll share this with the mason before the workday begins.
No doubt, he will appreciate your metaphors,
especially the gravel path at peace
and because the Land of the Rising Sun is in the East.
~jm
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silent_lotus
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| Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 1:50 pm Post subject: Morning Mortar-response |
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[quote="annaruiz"]
bamboo bowing
heron's smoky sky
lost in the horizon
~A
Ahhhh... so. Dear Silent.[/quote]
dear AnnA
the "lost' of your pen is a joyous reward.
a warm smile
silent lotus
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annaruiz
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| Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 3:06 pm Post subject: |
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Indeed. Shangri-La is but a breath away when the Silent Lotus is heard.
Love and Light,
Anna |
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silent_lotus
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| Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 1:10 pm Post subject: Morning Mortar-response2 |
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[quote="Ness"]
gravel paths at peace, the grey and the golden, beautifully writ, s_l
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dear Ness
thank you for that pumpkin thumbs up !
autumn smiles
silent lotus
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silent_lotus
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| Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 1:31 pm Post subject: Morning Mortar-response3 |
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Good morning dear silent lotus,
Your "Morning Mortar" is a delightful chakai.
Bows & smiles,
Dick
dear Dick
may you still have some wonderful Carolina autumn bike mornings.
handbreak and back peddling smiles
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sstoth0
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I wonder what will happen next
Steve |
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silent_lotus
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| Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:10 pm Post subject: Morning Mortar-response4 |
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[quote="zorba"]
come noon sun spreads
On liquid lake
moving mercury musing
Settled rocks
Receive thrust
Of falling water
Trees spike on
Loamy land
Pine needles stacked beneath
Autumn in full bloom
Marsh hold footprints
Covered in
Its chrome blanket
I know you have been here
Before me
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dear Zorba
thank you for your gifts
a warm smile
silent lotus
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