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Buddhist : Zen / Chan 18th Century	About Hakuin Timeline (1686 - 1768)
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English version by Lucien Stryk and Takashi Ikemoto Original Language Japanese	Past, present, future: unattainable,
Commentary by Ivan M. Granger Themes   Moon   Night   Sky   Spring Blossom     Recommended Books Essential Teachings of Zen Master Hakuin, by Norman Waddell Secrets of the Blue Cliff Record: Zen Comments by Hakuin and Tenkei, Translated by Thomas Cleary Wild Ivy: The Spiritual Autobiography of Zen Master Hakuin, Translated by Norman Waddell The Zen Koan, by Isshu Miura / Ruth Fuller Sasaki Zen Poetry: Let the Spring Breeze Enter, Translated by Lucien Stryk / Translated by Takashi Ikemoto	Past, present, future: unattainable, Yet clear as the moteless sky. Late at night the stool's cold as iron, But the moonlit window smells of plum.     -- from Zen Poetry: Let the Spring Breeze Enter, Translated by Lucien Stryk / Translated by Takashi Ikemoto Amazon.com
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Commentary by Ivan M. Granger

This poem by Hakuin is saying a great deal about the sacred state in its few lines.

Hakuin states that past, present, and future are "unattainable." That is, they cannot be grasped. They are always in motion. People instinctively want to reside in a fixed place within time, but Hakuin is reminding us that that is an impossibility; one can only acknowledge the ceaseless flow of experience without clinging.

This realization leads to a still mind. Sky is often a metaphor for the awareness, that which overarches and reveals all things to perception. When the awareness is "moteless," no thoughts obstuct the mind, making it clear.

The moon is often a codeword in Buddhist poetry for the individual mind attaining enlightened awareness. And plum, cherry, and other spring blossoms, represent the natural flowering or awakening of Buddha mind in early spring after the long winter of spiritual practice. So when Hakuin speaks of how "the moonlit window smells of plum," he is poetically telling us how this glimpse of pure insight resulting from a deeply still mind holds the delightful promise of Nirvana.

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