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Keeping Quiet

Pablo Neruda, Pablo Neruda poetry, Secular or Eclectic, Secular or Eclectic poetry,  poetry, [TRADITION SUB2] poetry,  poetry by Pablo Neruda
(1904 - 1973) Timeline

English version by
Alastair Reid

Original Language
Spanish

Secular or Eclectic
20th Century

Now we will count to twelve
and we will all keep still.

For once on the face of the earth
let's not speak in any language,
let's stop for one second,
and not move our arms so much.

It would be an exotic moment
without rush, without engines,
we would all be together
in a sudden strangeness.

Fishermen in the cold sea
would not harm whales
and the man gathering salt
would look at his hurt hands.

Those who prepare green wars,
wars with gas, wars with fire,
victory with no survivors,
would put on clean clothes
and walk about with their brothers
in the shade, doing nothing.

What I want should not be confused
with total inactivity.
Life is what it is about;
I want no truck with death.

If we were not so single-minded
about keeping our lives moving,
and for once could do nothing,
perhaps a huge silence
might interrupt this sadness
of never understanding ourselves
and of threatening ourselves with death.
Perhaps the earth can teach us
as when everything seems dead
and later proves to be alive.

Now I'll count up to twelve
and you keep quiet and I will go.

 

 

 


/ Photo by Maks Karochkin /

Themes

  Death
  Fire
  Silence
  Water
 


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100 Love Sonnets, by Pablo Neruda / Translated by Stephen Tapscott
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The Essential Neruda: Selected Poems, by Pablo Neruda / Translated by John Felstiner

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Commentary by Ivan M. Granger

In modern society we are under so much pressure to do and to accomplish. That has it's rightful place, sure, but it is only one small fraction of a well-lived life. When action crowds out everything else in life, we have lost something essential.

What's more, Pablo Neruda reminds us of something we so easily forget: All suffering and all cruelty, all warfare and all destruction, they all result from someone's ambition. Think what sort of world we'd have if the conquerors and hyper-industrialists were instead introverts. If the world must have its Nazis, Lord, let them be lazy Nazis!

Periods of inaction, taking time for reflection or simply a pause from barreling through the day -- imagine the rest the human spirit cries out for and what healing work it can do in the world.

Now we will count to twelve
and we will all keep still.


...nine...ten...eleven...

 

 


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