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Taoist 8th Century	About Li Po Timeline (701 - 762)
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English version by Kenneth Hope Original Language Chinese	Yellow Crane Terrace
Commentary by Ivan M. Granger Themes   Sky   Spring Blossom   Water       Recommended Books Endless River: Li Po and Tu Fu: A Friendship in Poetry, Translated by Sam Hamill The Enlightened Heart: An Anthology of Sacred Poetry, by Stephen Mitchell Li Pai: 200 Selected Poems, Translated by Rewi Alley Li Po and Tu Fu: Poems, Translated by Arthur Cooper The Poetry of Zen: (Shambhalla Library), Edited by Sam Hamill / Edited by J. P. Seaton More >>	Here he is, my good old friend! He's at Yellow Crane Terrace on a western departure. And--we're saying goodbye, goodbye. He's in a cloud of third-month blossoms. He's off downstream to Yang-chou. That shadow there is his lonely sail. Now there's nothing left of it. All the blue is empty now. All you can see is that long, long river. It flows to the edge of the sky.
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Commentary by Ivan M. Granger

Blossoms, as I've said elsewhere, are a common reference in Chinese and Japanese poetry to the natural opening of enlightenment that occurs after the hard winter of spiritual practice. Li Po's friend is "in a cloud of third-month blossoms" -- that is, enlightenment that is full, mature, no longer tenuous.

Li Po watches his friend's "lonely sail" until there is nothing left of it and "all the blue is empty now." The more he tries to hold the vision of his friend, the more his friend disappears into blissful Nirvana until only the empty sky, pure mind, is observed.

The "long, long river," the flow of life (or, if you prefer, the flow of life energy) empties itself into the open sky of unlimited awareness.

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