Gaze at the Sun.
You will be astonished.
You will see two Suns,
Sun within Sun.
The first, known Sun,
Is not with its known
Brigh yellow colour,
It is more very bright
White and a little
Yellow.
And somehow it seemed
To me, that It is not at its ‘normal’
Place, it is like it has moved…
The second Sun, as I saw it,
Is somehow within,
Or behind the first Sun,
But they seem as one,
Like the two Suns
have been merged…
Its colour is definitely
Blue-violet…
Ivan, when you have time ! Could you perhaps look at the ‘share’ links at the bottom of the website and consider putting in. Facebook Share button.
Loved this poem and especially your commentary as always.
Xx💗🙏💗xX
Isabel
Er, apologies! I’ve found the share button on this, the main page 😕
Gaze at the Sun.
You will be astonished.
You will see two Suns,
Sun within Sun.
The first, known Sun,
Is not with its known
Brigh yellow colour,
It is more very bright
White and a little
Yellow.
And somehow it seemed
To me, that It is not at its ‘normal’
Place, it is like it has moved…
The second Sun, as I saw it,
Is somehow within,
Or behind the first Sun,
But they seem as one,
Like the two Suns
have been merged…
Its colour is definitely
Blue-violet…
Very clear vision…
from inside
outside
Look and you will See…